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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 7:58 am


syakmp

Mainstream Artist
Mainstream Artist
OMG!! That was one of the best Scandal fics I've ever read...!!!! <3 I thought that Tomo was actually the one having the dream but instead it was all 4 of them... how creepy. I love Rina's killer insticts!

Please write more! I'm begging you with my hands and knees!! <3

Please Please

I love your suggestion for a comedy!

Dance Dance


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 8:33 am


bleachnlife

International Performer
International Performer
F*** S*** NOOOOO *goes berserk* *turns into a hollow*

Man you've done the MOST intense fanfiction I've ever read, absolutely hands down. Just OMG I has was a fit whilst reading. Looks like their dream is a deja vu...

This is your best first shot! I bow down to you.... Praise

I love how you transformed Rina from a all warm and happy girl into a cold blooded, emotionless killer for her friend's sake. Amazing... just amazing... you have that imagination in! Now Let it flow!


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 8:52 am


parkel

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International Performer
that.
was.
breathtaking.

just when i posted i wanted more.

i shall erect a golden statue in your honour.


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 9:35 am


bleachnlife

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International Performer
parkel wrote:that.
was.
breathtaking.

just when i posted i wanted more.

i shall erect a golden statue in your honour.

I shall erect one in my universe... lol


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:40 am


leachim_paloyz15

Mainstream Artist
Mainstream Artist
Keep up the good work! Thumbs Onion

Yours have less typographical errors than others, which is great for me since I usually read this kind of stuff to improve my English aside from wanting to be entertained.

P.S. If you need someone who can draw:
Spoiler:
Good luck finding one.

<font size="1">And don't look at me 'cause I've decided not to step in the field of drawing anymore.</font>

Hahaha! Tongue

You did a really great job.

I'm also thinking to convert the game I'm making about SCANDAL into a fanfic/manga, but--
(Well this is getting off-topic.)

Too sum it all up, what I really want to say is: Good luck! Praise


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:49 am


bleachnlife

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International Performer
^Dude shes American... >_> you'd expect almost flawless writing...


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:52 am


k_concepcion18

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http://www.scandaloid4.blog.com
GRAWR OMG. AWESOME!! MAKE MORE MAKE MORE!! Tantrum Onion


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 1:10 pm


gaLa_LiannE08

Indie Artist
Indie Artist
PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!

I want to KILL that MIB after he killed all the girls!!! Rage
Hahaha, You've made a villain that I'm so enjoying to hate..lol

Make MORE FANFICS!!..


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 1:43 pm


Mr. Suzuki

International Performer
International Performer
pretty good.
I liked the end, but I cannot forgive this man in black
WANT TO KILL HIM


please write another


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 8:26 pm


Hawaii fan

International Performer
International Performer
heh heh im glad you guys enjoyed it.

i was debating whether to write another one, comedy, another horror story, or if you guys have ideas or want to see something, jus post them here. i'll see if the imagination box feels like writing another story.


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HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Sat Oct 20, 2012 10:48 pm


bleachnlife

International Performer
International Performer
Hawaii fan wrote:heh heh im glad you guys enjoyed it.

i was debating whether to write another one, comedy, another horror story, or if you guys have ideas or want to see something, jus post them here. i'll see if the imagination box feels like writing another story.


Lol you could make happy tree friends.... thats gross gory/horror and cute comedy. I prefer not but its up to you. Detective fanfiction? Gangster/ drug wars? Food/ cooking? Paranormal?

Just go for it Cool


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Mon Oct 22, 2012 7:14 am


Reuiem.Sonores

Shiroten Performer
Shiroten Performer
Am i the only one enjoying all the bloodshed?


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- Ominous Requiem.
Mourning Macabre.
Grieving Memories.
Melancholic Fate.
Saddened Truth.
Restrained Vessel.
Lugubrious Existence.
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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Mon Oct 22, 2012 8:08 am


kaishun

Mainstream Artist
Mainstream Artist
it awesome
me wan more

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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:02 am


k_concepcion18

Shiroten Performer
Shiroten Performer
http://www.scandaloid4.blog.com
Reuiem.Sonores wrote:Am i the only one enjoying all the bloodshed?

Onion Kill? i guess i am, too. Onion Wahaha


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:22 am


bleachnlife

International Performer
International Performer
I was more like "Jaw-drops-to-the-table shocked" and yelling why why why? but I did like the stabbed till she was like cheese expression.


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:59 am


milena98

Caless Student
Caless Student
WOW that is absolutely amazing.You are very good. Keep writing you've got gift. I almost cried when they died but the story is wonderful. Clap Praise


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Re: Nightmare
Posted on Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:24 am


Hiei

International Performer
International Performer
I did have one, after studying for 4 years in my province's capital, i went back to my home town, at the very first night, i had this nightmare of being played by a demon- punched, kicked, everything that may hurt me.


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In the morning, let the sun give you enough warmth which my love fails to do. And at noon, let the wind carry my felicitations and bring it to you. With louder sounds, bury it more, until only our hearts can hear that song which plays only between the two of us. If possible, make the night darker until our emotions are radiant enough to be seen. 

This clock which ticks differently on the two of us, hasten its pace so that our paths may converge in the future. This clock which fills me with sorrow as it reminds of how impossible it is for me to even see you, hasten its pace so that my sorrows would be drowned. Let me sleep therefore, so that I could prepare for tomorrow, as I did today, in making these thoughts and aspirations materialize. So let me sleep then, so that your presence would give me hints in accomplishing these goals.
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