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Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 6:29 am

Hawaii fan

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hi there! i read a lot of people's fanfic and decided to write one too. although mine isn't as good as everyone else' but i felt like sharing it so here you go

Spoiler:

sorry its the first chapter and it was kinda slow but i'm trying to make up for it in chapter 2



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HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 8:47 am

bleachnlife

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HOMG We're on a SCANDAL fanfiction high! Oh please continue~!!

Yours is GREAT keep going urgh god... gahhh .dance. Don't say you're isn't good enough compared others... unless you fishing for a compliment... .hmmm. but its good all fanfics have their all uniqueness just like their authors :3 you don't differ from that.



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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 10:13 am

Hawaii fan

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haha nah im jus happy to share a story with everyone. thanks for reading though. .happy.

I'm starting chapter 2 so it should be done by tomorrow if not well hopefully saturday. i jus came up with this story land was like i wonder if this would be a good fanfic, haha



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 10:56 am

atamarashi

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I really enjoyed reading that, it had me on the edge of my seat, even up to that cliff hanger.

Looking forward to the next chapter! :D




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No matter what kind of sadness happens today, you can make your own HAPPINESS tomorrow.
It makes no difference in the number of tears,
The amount of happiness is up to you.
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 11:26 am

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That's a great fic so far! Enjoyed it very much! SH is on a fanfic fever!! We must keep going! <3

Ah... I love Timo in the fic... Looking forward to next chapter! .clap. .wow.

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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 12:05 pm

Hawaii fan

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thanks for reading guys! i should be done with chapter 2 by tonight cuz idk where all this ideas are coming from. so i'll post it later tonight and begin chapter 3 before i forget everything i have in my head.



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:41 pm

Hawaii fan

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sorry for the double posting, this is a one time deal of double posting. i apologize for my double posting

so here's chapter 2

Spoiler:

i wanted to put a little bit more scary aspects but i'll save that for the next chapter which will be up tomorrow.



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:52 pm

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OMG!! <3 I love this story now! Please continue... I love Haruna's leadership in this story but poor Rina... Looks like I have a great story that I need to continue reading tomorrow...

Btw, just how many chapters do you think this fic will be?? I wanna try and read this as long as I can and it keeps me at the edge of my seat!

.sweat.

Mami-tasu!!!!! .waaa.

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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:55 pm

bleachnlife

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As a side note.... I'm pretty sure you can stop blood flow from the arm... and its not that seriously compared to strikes to the body and larger veins on the thighs...

But anyway I like how its going... they dropping one by one... heheheheheheheheheheehehe
Add some detail but I love it~! Perfect for halloween!

For once I wish SCANDAL could understand English... because we've got quality done fanfictions... just some aren't so G rated.



SCANDAL Haruna .happy. SCANDAL Mami Nice one SCANDAL Tomomi  .lol.  SCANDAL Rina .uhuh. SCANDAL
SCANDAL brightens my everyday

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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:09 pm

Hawaii fan

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thanks guys. i was getting lazy and i forgot to add the part where blood stopped dripping on Rina's arm. haha but overall it turned out well. haha

i haven't really planned out the chapters, and the storyline is being made as i type out each chapter. but i don't plan to drag this for a long time because eventually there has to be an ending to this type of story. so I'm gonna give a guess of about 10 chapters at most if not possibly less. we'll see how the story progresses.

but i do have plans to have Rina come back in the next chapter so Rina fans she will be back.

however, spoiler alert: only one will be alive by the end. that's my intention.



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:28 pm

bleachnlife

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Hawaii fan wrote:thanks guys. i was getting lazy and i forgot to add the part where blood stopped dripping on Rina's arm. haha but overall it turned out well. haha

i haven't really planned out the chapters, and the storyline is being made as i type out each chapter. but i don't plan to drag this for a long time because eventually there has to be an ending to this type of story. so I'm gonna give a guess of about 10 chapters at most if not possibly less. we'll see how the story progresses.

but i do have plans to have Rina come back in the next chapter so Rina fans she will be back.

however, spoiler alert: only one will be alive by the end. that's my intention.
LOL only one comes out alive... maybe lets strip her brain cells and make her delirious...

I think most will agree of the unplanned plot of each of our fanfictions.... I think thats where all the twists and turns come from. But you need to know your basic: how are you going to end it and maybe a vague idea as to what you want in body of the story.



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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:32 pm

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oooooo.... one comes out alive... perfect story for halloween! Looking forward to it! Well not to SCANDAL's deaths but to the story... You get what I mean!

Although... I am reluctant on some Scandal members getting killed by a massive katana.... will be a sad yet horrifying story as well....

Nice one

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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:51 pm

Hawaii fan

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haha yep one is gonna come out alive but she won't be the same. however there's a nice twist at the end. at least i hope so but i have an idea of how i will end it. so the ending isn't so much I'm worried about. its more of how long i can keep making the story without running out of ideas too quickly.

chapter 3 is being worked on so i should have it up soon. i'm actually having fun writing this. haha i have so many ideas of how the story will flow and what will happen to each member. btw thanks for the great feedback. haha maybe the next story will be a comedy or something.



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 3:39 pm

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Hawaii fan wrote:haha yep one is gonna come out alive but she won't be the same. however there's a nice twist at the end. at least i hope so but i have an idea of how i will end it. so the ending isn't so much I'm worried about. its more of how long i can keep making the story without running out of ideas too quickly.

chapter 3 is being worked on so i should have it up soon. i'm actually having fun writing this. haha i have so many ideas of how the story will flow and what will happen to each member. btw thanks for the great feedback. haha maybe the next story will be a comedy or something.

Now you know why we write fanfictions and we continue to do so; because its interesting and fun! Unlike a story created entirely by you, fanfictions give a you basic characters to work off which makes it all that easier and better.



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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 3:42 pm

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And it was only just a dream... or was it? Nice fanfic. Nice one Would love to see the next chapter.



- Ominous Requiem.
Mourning Macabre.
Grieving Memories.
Melancholic Fate.
Saddened Truth.
Restrained Vessel.
Lugubrious Existence.
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 4:24 pm

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kyyaaaa . nice fanfic Nice one looking forward for chapter 3~



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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 5:28 pm

Hawaii fan

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okay here's chapter 3, i got kinda lazy but somehow finished it. okay I'm done for the day i did 3 weeks worth...haha jk jk but maybe i'll upload another chapter tomorrow if i feel like it.

Spoiler:

spoiler: next chapter won't be too brutal and it'll be an easy going chapter so i can give some time for Rina and Tomomi to some what prepare



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 5:39 pm

bleachnlife

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.wtf. HOMG WTF
I'm dazed... wow what a chapter... two down in one chapter... this is going quick! F*** this is Halloween!

Its good. KEEP GOING!



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SCANDAL brightens my everyday

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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 5:57 pm

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NO!!!!. MAMI! HARU!
Your fanfic is good too, you know. And it's breaking my heart! The girls are dying one by one..T.T

Looking forward for the next chapter..Happy




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Re: Nightmare
Posted Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:40 pm

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Nightmare 912887I want to kill the man in black.
first he cut my rina-chan Nightmare 692641, and now kills Haruna.



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Re: Nightmare
Posted Sat Oct 20, 2012 1:07 am

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kyaaaa~ gotta love the thrill! your fanfic totally gives us the halloween spirit. go for it! Nice one

and oh.. Rina chaaaan. .OMG.









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Re: Nightmare
Posted Sat Oct 20, 2012 4:48 am

Hawaii fan

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here's chapter 4, this chapter is kinda slow because i didn't wanna jus kill off all the members in one go so this chapter is gonna be a little laid back, easy going. next chapter will be epic. i hope. so i'll have chapter 5 up later tonight.

Spoiler:


Spoiler alert: i decided when to end the story so theres gonna be a couple more chapters and then the conclusion



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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Re: Nightmare
Posted Sat Oct 20, 2012 8:23 am

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OH NO ANOTHER ONE BITES THE DUST! .dance.
ANOTHER GONE
ANOTHER GONE
ANOTHER BITES THE DUST

Oh god has Rina turned into some Macbeth character or something?!

You do know Firearms are literally out of reach for most civilians in Japan... In reality neither Rina or Tomo could have gotten access to real firearms. So lets make this story in America lol



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SCANDAL brightens my everyday

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Re: Nightmare
Posted Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:09 pm

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Can't get enough of this.
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Re: Nightmare
Posted Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:31 pm

Hawaii fan

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Woohoo! Chapter 5 is up! and this is the ending of the short and fun fanfic. i hope you guys enjoyed it. i hope the ending is okay..... but have fun reading it. maybe i'll come up with another story to share with you all.

happy reading

Spoiler:

i'll leave the face part and the ending to your imagination.



Nightmare 2282749210 SCANDAL is the Most Powerful Japanese Girl Rock Band  Nightmare 2282749210

HARUNA, MAMI, TOMOMI, RINA!!

''If there's no Rina, there won't be SCANDAL anymore.''- Ono Haruna

"You can go anywhere.
You can choose the way to go on your own
The answer is for sure not just one

What's your Standard?!" - "STANDARD" SCANDAL
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